The Old Horse Knows the Way


The Old Horse Knows the Way

A long time ago an army and a general went to war. When the war started it was spring and winter when it ended. When the war was over, they got lost on their way home because everything looked different due to it was then winter. Everything was covered in layers of ice and snow. This soon caused many soldiers to become scared and worried. The general said loudly, "Stop talking! I know a way to go back home. All we need to do is follow this old horse home," to the army gesturing to the oldest horse they had. "It has the most experience out of all of us," added the general. The crowd of soldiers murmured quietly, but they followed the old horse. Before long the horse had led them back home safely and swiftly.

識途老馬 (韓非子.說林)Seniors with experience have a lot of knowledge because they have gone through many things.They tend to know what is the best choice or solution to a problem.

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  1. A long time ago an army and a general went to war. When the war started it was spring and winter when it ended. When the war was over, they got lost on their way home because everything looked different due to it was then winter. Everything was covered in layers of ice and snow. This soon caused many soldiers to become scared and worried. The general said loudly, "Stop talking! I know a way to go back home. All we need to do is follow this old horse home," to the army gesturing to the oldest horse they had. "It has the most experience out of all of us," added the general. The crowd of soldiers murmured quietly, but they followed the old horse. Before long the horse had led them back home safely and swiftly.


    Seniors with experience have a lot of knowledge because they have gone through many things. They tend to know what is the best choice or solution to a problem.

    Notes: Good Job. I only changed a few small things due to wording issues and tenses. Make sure your tense of words is consistent throughout your writing.

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  2. Thanks, I will work hard to improve my writing.

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