Dresses
This poem I wrote is called Dresses. This poem is a Cinquain. A cinquain is poem that uses a 5-line pattern. Line 1 is one word (the title), Line 2 is two words that describe the title, Line 3 is three words that tell the action, Line 4 is four words that express the feeling, Line 5 is one word that recalls the title.
Dresses
Colorful Stylish
Wearing Dressing Looking
There Are Many Different Kinds
Clothing
Again I like that you are venturing out into different forms of poetry.
ReplyDeleteWhen describing what a cinquain poem you need to add an "a" between is and poem to make it flow better.
There're is saying "There Are" so you line reads There Are Are Many Different Kinds" So you need to change the "There're" to just "There"
Also just a presentation note I would maybe change the yellow text to a different color because it is very hard to read, I had to highlight the poem to see the yellow text. Otherwise great work.
Thanks I will correct the poem ASAP.
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